Ok people I have a request can you actually leave me some input on the song I sent it to Judah with the hopes of getting feedback on it..if you don't lik eit I'd like to know why...and vice versa..these are things I tske into consideration when I write..if ever I write, right? right! lol
But seriously let me know what's good with the beat, the mix, lyrics, concept anything!
ok look this joint is bad on so many levels, lyrics, beat and the singing is horrible. The beat is track to the 10 degree. for all the talk I expected more
get $$$ see that's what i don't like but i wont elaborate an make it something it isn't Im back to the drawing board! Thanx for what you don't even know you did!
Ok...rhyme scheme was decent lyrics were ok wordplay was just so so...could've been a lil' better...the main thing I believe makes this song mediocore is the beat. I fucks wit the beat don't get me wrong but it just dosen't match the vibe of the lyrics in my opinion to form a complete song.
lol @ rime scheme...that may have been 1 and 2 syllable...but the RHYME SCHEME was somethign different...i rhymed every word...*walks off quoting jigga*
*do you fools listen to music or do you just scheme thru it*
hey dawg...i thought it was ok. the beat was not original, but, the production was cool. i think people are being harder on it than they should. its a cool song. 7/10
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Mo Betta on a recording!
MO BETTA MIXIN DA MICHAEL JACKSON JOINT WITH A TWIST OF GOSPEL...JUST WHEN I THOUGHT I HEARD IT ALL...TIME FOR A COMEBACK LOL.
YOU YOU YOU YOU ALREADY KNOOOOOOOOOW!!!!
AMEN MY BROTHER AMEN
GOOD SONG
SOME THING DIFFERENT
[Asher]you know the worlds gon wrong, when betta record songs and...[/Roth]
hummm 5/10
i dont like it
church...lmao!!!
6/10
Ok people I have a request can you actually leave me some input on the song I sent it to Judah with the hopes of getting feedback on it..if you don't lik eit I'd like to know why...and vice versa..these are things I tske into consideration when I write..if ever I write, right? right! lol
But seriously let me know what's good with the beat, the mix, lyrics, concept anything!
ok look this joint is bad on so many levels, lyrics, beat and the singing is horrible. The beat is track to the 10 degree. for all the talk I expected more
THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The singing wasn't to really be taken serious tho that was me having fun recording myself...I'd most likely take that out if I put it on myspace...
but the rest I appreciate thanx again...
I got another on the myspace Im curious if you feel the same myspace.com/thetruthandthelight
"spread the word"
Hype before always tends to lead to dissapointment or atleast seems that way doesn't it? Oh well I love the pressure next time perhaps!
3/10 come on wise one you dont need us to tell you why this song sucks.
get $$$ see that's what i don't like but i wont elaborate an make it something it isn't Im back to the drawing board! Thanx for what you don't even know you did!
Ok...rhyme scheme was decent lyrics were ok wordplay was just so so...could've been a lil' better...the main thing I believe makes this song mediocore is the beat. I fucks wit the beat don't get me wrong but it just dosen't match the vibe of the lyrics in my opinion to form a complete song.
it sounds like raheem davaughn and al sharpton had good day and went to crystal skates to celebrate...
the rime scheme is basic...only one and two syllable rimes...is ok i guess...in the eighties....
the beat was cool for what is was to be used for...and the singin well..........if you not going to be serious then why are you doing this?......
lol @ rime scheme...that may have been 1 and 2 syllable...but the RHYME SCHEME was somethign different...i rhymed every word...*walks off quoting jigga*
*do you fools listen to music or do you just scheme thru it*
oh and g*two i got ya robert townsend....lol
hey dawg...i thought it was ok. the beat was not original, but, the production was cool.
i think people are being harder on it than they should. its a cool song. 7/10
not bad mo. we need a album
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